DIY Amateur Art and Literature Museum

[bacon]

Haiku about beer is always a win!

[Edd]

It's not a white background with dark text, though. Its a mid-brightness background with black text and white hyperlinks. I just uploaded the new versions of my pages. How is it?

Great job, ADoS!

You might want to update your copyright, though.

[TwistedSister]

Not to seem like a brat (which I can be at times) but I posted one of my poems quite awhile back and no one said squat about it.
Humph.

[Ham Nox]

Haikus!!


Ode to Random

Miracles Purple
Q-Tip Avatar Flimsy
And This Makes No Sense

[Roland Deschain]

Not to seem like a brat (which I can be at times) but I posted one of my poems quite awhile back and no one said squat about it.
Humph.

Your prose is lovely.
It fills us with such great joy.
Oh, please post some more.

[bacon]

I liked what you wrote, TS!

Alright let me try a haiku

Bacon in the pan
You are very delicious
Arteries will clog

[Zankou 2.0]

Might I call to mind
That time, many ages back
When I TALKED like this?

In other news, there are some new poems on my deviantArt. Be sure to pay mind to "The Darkness Spreads", which won first place in the Poetry category of the OECTA Young Author's Award competition, (at the school level). Not posted is the Short Story that won the same level in it's category. However, the French poem that won city-wide in its category is posted.


And, when I finish writing the play I am hoping will win in its category next year, I shall post it. It will be written entirely in verse, and in Early Modern English.

[daftbeaker]

I do like Guinness
Truly a wonderful beer
Why is my poo black?

[Zankou 2.0]

I do like Guinness
Truly a wonderful beer
Why is my poo black?

Thou art bleeding profusely from thy intestines, thou ale-sousèd dink.
Pray tell me what it is that compells good men to drink?
For alcohol is, verily, a thing that is quite vile.
It certainly is not a thing that fits into my style.

[black bart]

In Llanelli brewed
A beer called Felinfoel proud
Now Read that out loud

[Roland Deschain]

Dear Llangollen

In dear Llangollen,
With your old bridge and steam train,
O'er slate, river flows.

Condiments

Arllwys halen ar,
Pupur ysgafn arllwys,
Finegr nesaf.

Welsh blood floeth strongly in me.

[black bart]

You can say the double LLs????!!!!

[Roland Deschain]

You can say the double LLs????!!!!

Yes I can. I have been complimented on them by Welsh brethren, even though i've never lived there. I've also added another haiku for you.

[black bart]

I can say Llanelli but that's about it.

[Zankou 2.0]

What's that? There are a bunch of new poems on Zankou's deviantART?

And he's BEGGING for constructive criticism?